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Post  kaerlighed on Thu Dec 16, 2010 8:51 pm

IMPORTANT INFORMATION:

CHARACTERS:

Fire:
Princess Detia
Orinda (Detia's mother)
Firelord Kai (Detia's father)
Po (Detia's family servant)
Avatar Arabella (mastered all four already)

Water:
Calder

Air:
Kiwidinok (goes by Kiwi)

Earth:
Avan

Detia's Spirit Friend:
Roohi

Will add more when they come along.

PLOT LINE:
- Will be no Avatar state.
- Will be no Chakras
- Totally different plot line for the anime.
- No spirit world (Roohi will be explained during the story)
- No Appa, Momo or many creatures for that matter. Will no doubt have a dragon though. (some might be added later, some not)
- Yes, the fire nation is in battle, but only with the water tribes. Earth and Air are 'wimpy', so to say.


so anyways, chapter will come soon. I'm techincaly supposed to be doing homework right now, so when that's done, I'll think of adding the first chapter.


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Post  kaerlighed on Thu Dec 16, 2010 8:52 pm

Chapter 1

"No, father, No!" Detia yelled, storming away. Once more, her father was trying to push marriage on her. She knew it wasn't long before he'd blow up and just plain out make her do it. But she refused to marry at the young age of 16 to a 22 year old for that matter.

She waltzed into her room and locked the door before jumping onto her bed and screaming into her pillow. Life as the Fire Nation princess was tough work. She always had to attend stupid meetings, met complete strangers and showed off her firebending; all of which she hated doing. She didn't like the fact that she was 'more important' then everyone else in the Nation. She wanted equality in their beautiful land. Like that would happen Her husband, whoever he might be, would no doubt take her fathers side of things.

Firelord Kai loved the power he had. He ruled over the land in a cruel matter. He never gave anything to the less fortunate, he took advantage of those below his status, and everything else. Her mother, Orinda, never approved of anything of the things he did, but she had no power to change the way he was. Orinda had told Detia of how her father hit her when she gave birth to a girl. He was so mad that he took it out on his wife. He may have only hit her twice, but it bruised her heart forever.

They acted as the happy married couple around everyone, but alone, Orinda would rather die. Kai was not a nice man, very demanding. Orinda was just glad that her daughter never became like him.

As Detia screamed into her pillow, a soothing hand rested upon her shoulder.

"It's alright sweety, you know how your father is." Roohi cooed, sitting down beside the princess.

"No it's no Ro. He's being once more a huge b-"

"No swearing princess." Roohi scolded, not liking that the young 16 year old picked up a bad habbit of swearing when talking about her father.

"I'm sorry Ro. But he just makes me so mad." Detia screamed once more, and rolled onto her back to see the face of her spirited friend.

And spirit, she means litterraly. Very few children had spirit friends. It was those unfortunate kids with bad childhoods that usually have spirit friends. Detia was one of those kids. Roohi was her best and only friend that she had and she was grateful that he came to her when she was the mere age of 2.

"Why does he make me do all these thing?" Detia groaned, sitting up.

Roohi sighed, "You know why he does these things, Dey."

"I know," Detia said, a sad look in her face. It was that moment there was a knock on the door.

"Princess Detia?"

"Come in Po." Detia said, hearing her familly servant's voice.

Po walked into the room and bowed his head. "The Firelord request your attention."

Detia sighed and got up, "tell him I'll be there in a few." Po nodded and left.

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Post  kaerlighed on Fri Dec 17, 2010 9:10 pm

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Post  kaerlighed on Fri Jan 14, 2011 6:01 pm

Topic is locked due to inactivity. Story will be continued hopefully soon. Smile

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