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Post  PhazonDragon on Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:55 am

I think something furless/featherless would be good for S1. Or maybe down? Like a baby bird?

And I can red line the original sprite if you want, if that will help. I didn't do it before because I didn't know if you would like that. I know I don't want people touching my work without my permission.

On the S1 sprite though, the tail looks very weird, and unnaturally stiff in that position. It might look better to have it curl around the paws or something. And I have no clue what those are supposed to be... Well, I know they're limbs, but they look... weird. :/ I dunno how else to describe it.
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Post  TitiMiny on Mon Nov 08, 2010 6:28 pm

PhazonDragon wrote:I think something furless/featherless would be good for S1. Or maybe down? Like a baby bird?

And I can red line the original sprite if you want, if that will help. I didn't do it before because I didn't know if you would like that. I know I don't want people touching my work without my permission.

On the S1 sprite though, the tail looks very weird, and unnaturally stiff in that position. It might look better to have it curl around the paws or something. And I have no clue what those are supposed to be... Well, I know they're limbs, but they look... weird. :/ I dunno how else to describe it.

They're folded wings, not paws. Go ahead and redline if you want.. and i admit the tail is annoying :/

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Post  DragonTamerChris on Mon Nov 08, 2010 7:28 pm

Nice Very Happy.

I think I already made an egg descrption but:

Egg:
"This egg is light brown and oval shaped."
Hatchie (1)
"Hey look, a cute cat creature hatched from that egg you found. It also resembles an owl."

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Post  TitiMiny on Mon Nov 08, 2010 8:02 pm

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Tried to fix on my own..
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Post  Rebsingh on Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:08 pm

TitiMiny wrote: Cat Owls  - Page 3 2426c2opycopy

Tried to fix on my own..
I tried fixing it up a bit, I hope you don't mind. :3

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Post  DragonTamerChris on Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:21 pm

I like the edits rebs, I just wished the left wing was spread out more.

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Post  TitiMiny on Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:29 pm

Rebsingh wrote:
TitiMiny wrote: Cat Owls  - Page 3 2426c2opycopy

Tried to fix on my own..
I tried fixing it up a bit, I hope you don't mind. :3

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i like, but there's a random black line in the wing that looks off and that wasn't there on my sprite O;..it won't look off if you color the areas that peachy color the body is.
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Post  Rebsingh on Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:35 pm

Can you fix up the rest? I just put in and did things that bothered me, I think you can take it from here Smile Its almost done! Very Happy

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Post  DragonTamerChris on Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:37 pm

Yes, titi, I love the work you did with this sprite and I hope you become a spriter here at avadopts. Wink

The cat owl hatchie 1 is cool.

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Post  PhazonDragon on Tue Nov 09, 2010 1:42 am

TitiMiny wrote:
PhazonDragon wrote:I think something furless/featherless would be good for S1. Or maybe down? Like a baby bird?

And I can red line the original sprite if you want, if that will help. I didn't do it before because I didn't know if you would like that. I know I don't want people touching my work without my permission.

On the S1 sprite though, the tail looks very weird, and unnaturally stiff in that position. It might look better to have it curl around the paws or something. And I have no clue what those are supposed to be... Well, I know they're limbs, but they look... weird. :/ I dunno how else to describe it.

They're folded wings, not paws. Go ahead and redline if you want.. and i admit the tail is annoying :/

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Better? :)
I said limbs, not paws. I figured they were wings, but I honestly couldn't tell because of how odd they looked.

And yes, that does look better (along with the adult edits. I like those, and I don't think my redline is needed anymore). Though it looks like the wing is just.. floating there. It doesn't look connected to the body.
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Post  TitiMiny on Tue Nov 09, 2010 7:07 pm

Kk i'll fix all that :>

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Post  DragonTamerChris on Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:02 pm

The only thing that needs fixing on the adult is the left wing, it dosen't even look like it has one right now. :/

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Post  TitiMiny on Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:11 pm

DragonTamerChris wrote:The only thing that needs fixing on the adult is the left wing, it dosen't even look like it has one right now. :/

it's folded...looks fine to me. i can bump it up a bit more, but im not making it in the same pose as the right.
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Post  DragonTamerChris on Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:16 pm

Now that I look at it, it looks fine to me. XD

Strange... how is hatchie (2) going?

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Post  TitiMiny on Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:39 pm

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Like that its going. currently spriting.
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Post  DragonTamerChris on Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:43 pm

Interesting, I can't wait to see the sprited version of that hatchie. Very Happy

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Post  TitiMiny on Tue Nov 09, 2010 9:53 pm

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Post  PhazonDragon on Wed Nov 10, 2010 3:32 am

TitiMiny wrote:Kk i'll fix all that :>

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Lovely. I think they both look brilliant now. <3 Good job.

And I can't wait to see that hatchling fixed up... Such a cute pose. XD
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Post  TitiMiny on Wed Nov 10, 2010 6:19 pm

PhazonDragon wrote:
TitiMiny wrote:Kk i'll fix all that :>

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Lovely. I think they both look brilliant now. <3 Good job.

And I can't wait to see that hatchling fixed up... Such a cute pose. XD

: ) Thanks you for helping though. I'll get on shading+ fixing that S2 right after i ate.
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Post  DragonTamerChris on Wed Nov 10, 2010 6:21 pm

Cool titi. Very Happy

I love these cat owls and can't wait for these to be released on the adoptable site avadopts. Very Happy

You are doing an excellent job with these sprites.

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Post  TitiMiny on Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:37 pm

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Post  DragonTamerChris on Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:47 pm

Nice Very Happy

Here are all the descriptions gathered in one post and the hatchie (2) and adult ones.

Egg:
"This egg is light brown and oval shaped."
Hatchie (1):
"Hey look, a cute cat creature hatched from that egg you found. It also resembles an owl."
Hatchie (2):
"The cute creature you found grew bigger and doesn't like to sleep much anymore. It also grew wings, this might mean it's growing up soon."
Adult:
"Cat owls are a happy breed of creatures. They fly around a lot and unlike owls they can be seen at night and day. Cat owls like to go near humans but they are always cautious when they are around them. When the cat owls breed they fly around in the sky and whichever cat owl is the fastest, most playful, and most active gets a mate and they breed. Cat owls are found in the air temples but they are also sold in quite a few shops around the earth kingdom".

Anyone think these descriptions need edits?

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Post  Rebsingh on Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:50 pm

expect 2 or 3 edits when they are added Wink

I'll add these next weekend, along with koala sheep, and maybe the cabbage slug. I just need pictures to go along with the searching part of the quest...

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Post  TitiMiny on Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:55 pm

Cool. I wasn't totally done as i am lacking the alts.

I though maybe they could have some markings elsewhere + different color. Though im not sure if it should be a redder color or more grey-like.

For now they'll have the same sprite pretty much like both genders will have, until i can make a few good sketches for the other gender/alts. ( Except the alt is slightly differently colored egg/current sprite).
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Post  Rebsingh on Wed Nov 10, 2010 8:18 pm

other gender... and alts? D:

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