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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  Rebsingh on Thu Jan 27, 2011 6:01 pm

Digidude123 wrote:Are the wings any better?
Not really what Phazon was looking for. Try making them a bit more clear as in see through.

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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  SilentSkieBlue on Thu Jan 27, 2011 6:05 pm

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SilentSkieBlue wrote:If I can say so, I think the shading needs to be smoothed out just a little bit--it looks too much like a low-res picture, and the textures aren't any different on different surfaces--if you can do something similar to what was done on the wings--smooth it out and make it look appropriately textured--it'll be top-notch.

Also, anatomy, since Phazon isn't around:

You're missing the far sided legs for the female--they should be visible.
The females head and beak aren't in sync--the way the beak is coming out of the head doesn't match up right to the position the head is in. I think that's what I'm trying to say, anyway.
The females abdomen is also kindof lopsided, like she's bloated or been squished.

The male's foremost leg is covered by something--I'm not sure if it's supposed to be a belly marking, but it makes it look like a fourth leg on the other side. Also, one looks like it connects to the abdomen, and not the torso-part. That's not how bugs work, and even if it's just a visual trick it should be changed.
The male's neck looks too thin and long for the size of his head. I've only taken basic physics but it looks like it'd snap in half, or have too thin of vertebrae to support itself.
His wings are also looking too small for his size. Not bad, but just a little bit too small.
...I'm pretty sure I fixed everything now...
There's definitely a noticeable improvement, but if you wouldn't mind, could I do some redlines? I think it'd be easier to show what I mean than to try to explain it.
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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  Digidude123 on Thu Jan 27, 2011 8:07 pm

Rebsingh wrote:
Digidude123 wrote:Are the wings any better?
Not really what Phazon was looking for. Try making them a bit more clear as in see through.
I mean the positions of the wings, I don't really know how to make them clear

also, feel free to make some red lines, SSB Very Happy
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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  ignite444 on Fri Jan 28, 2011 6:07 am

Did you all just ignore my post? I did say I can make them transparent. -.-

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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  Rebsingh on Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:03 am

ignite444 wrote:Did you all just ignore my post? I did say I can make them transparent. -.-
Ignite I meant the part of the wings that are over the body. XD I didn't ignore you. The rest of the wings will have to be made semi-transparent (which even I can do also) so yea. I was just talking about the wing part that is over lapping the body.

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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  ignite444 on Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:51 am

Oh, that part, lol.

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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  PhazonDragon on Fri Jan 28, 2011 12:40 pm

Rebsingh wrote:
ignite444 wrote:Did you all just ignore my post? I did say I can make them transparent. -.-
Ignite I meant the part of the wings that are over the body. XD I didn't ignore you. The rest of the wings will have to be made semi-transparent (which even I can do also) so yea. I was just talking about the wing part that is over lapping the body.
Are you going to change the opacity levels on the wings...?
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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  grayson1314 on Fri Jan 28, 2011 1:49 pm

Can I do the wings?

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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  ignite444 on Fri Jan 28, 2011 4:47 pm

I've already taken the wings.

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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  SilentSkieBlue on Fri Jan 28, 2011 6:49 pm


Before----------------------------------After

It was only about a pixel or two off the lines you drew, but I notice the difference. Also, could I touch up the shading--getting in there up close made me see some things that I could smooth out.
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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  ignite444 on Fri Jan 28, 2011 7:03 pm

Aw, I wanted to do the shading, I was just waiting on the anatomy to be fixed.

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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  SilentSkieBlue on Fri Jan 28, 2011 7:04 pm

Oh, if you wanted to do it, you don't have to worry about me. I thought the shading on it was pretty much done, so I offered to edit it--you can go for it if you want to~
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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  ignite444 on Fri Jan 28, 2011 7:07 pm

Well, the shading seems a bit odd to me, that's why i wanted to fix the rest of it.

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Re: Buzzard Wasp

Post  ignite444 on Sat Jan 29, 2011 7:30 pm

Btw, think you can save those as separate files instead of one big one?

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