ChuChu's Poetry....thingy
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ChuChu's Poetry....thingy
Awesome title, I know XD Well, watch me fail uberly at poetry 8D
Haikus:
Welcome to my haiku
Feel free to tell me I fail
Cause I know I do
Snow of a pure white
Drifting slowly from the sky
Is nature's blanket
Haikus:
Welcome to my haiku
Feel free to tell me I fail
Cause I know I do
Snow of a pure white
Drifting slowly from the sky
Is nature's blanket
Last edited by ChuChu on Tue Jan 25, 2011 11:20 pm; edited 1 time in total
ChuChu- Posts : 127
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Re: ChuChu's Poetry....thingy
ChuChu wrote:Awesome title, I know XD Well, watch me fail uberly at poetry 8D
Haikus:
Welcome to my haiku
Feel free to tell me I fail
Cause I know I do
Sry, but there's 6 sylables in the first line. :O
Wel-come-to-my-hai-ku. :/
kaerlighed- Moderator
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Re: ChuChu's Poetry....thingy
Dang, I knew the first line looked a bit long. ;-; I've been so out of it lately. Oh well, I guess that's why it's a fail haiku? *shot*kaerlighed wrote:ChuChu wrote:Awesome title, I know XD Well, watch me fail uberly at poetry 8D
Haikus:
Welcome to my haiku
Feel free to tell me I fail
Cause I know I do
Sry, but there's 6 sylables in the first line. :O
Wel-come-to-my-hai-ku. :/
ChuChu- Posts : 127
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Re: ChuChu's Poetry....thingy
you could put something like, This is my Haiku... lol
kaerlighed- Moderator
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Re: ChuChu's Poetry....thingy
I think it's better the way it is XP That way it's actually a fail haiku 8D Imma add another one in a minute though XP
ChuChu- Posts : 127
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Re: ChuChu's Poetry....thingy
I like the new haiku chu. ^^
kaerlighed- Moderator
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Re: ChuChu's Poetry....thingy
ChuChu wrote:Snow of a pure white
Drifting slowly from the sky
Is nature's blanket
Aaw, that's so pretty! I love snow kind of things hakus ^_~ Then again, I like all kind of haikus :0
kaerlighed wrote:I like the new haiku chu. ^^
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I wanna go sky
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Let's jump my friend!
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