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Post  ChuChu Tue Jan 11, 2011 11:13 pm

Awesome title, I know XD Well, watch me fail uberly at poetry 8D

Haikus:

Welcome to my haiku
Feel free to tell me I fail
Cause I know I do

Snow of a pure white
Drifting slowly from the sky
Is nature's blanket


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Post  kaerlighed Tue Jan 11, 2011 11:30 pm

ChuChu wrote:Awesome title, I know XD Well, watch me fail uberly at poetry 8D

Haikus:

Welcome to my haiku
Feel free to tell me I fail
Cause I know I do

Sry, but there's 6 sylables in the first line. :O

Wel-come-to-my-hai-ku. :/
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Post  ChuChu Tue Jan 11, 2011 11:48 pm

kaerlighed wrote:
ChuChu wrote:Awesome title, I know XD Well, watch me fail uberly at poetry 8D

Haikus:

Welcome to my haiku
Feel free to tell me I fail
Cause I know I do

Sry, but there's 6 sylables in the first line. :O

Wel-come-to-my-hai-ku. :/
Dang, I knew the first line looked a bit long. ;-; I've been so out of it lately. Oh well, I guess that's why it's a fail haiku? *shot*
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Post  kaerlighed Wed Jan 12, 2011 2:32 pm

you could put something like, This is my Haiku... lol

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Post  ChuChu Tue Jan 25, 2011 10:19 pm

I think it's better the way it is XP That way it's actually a fail haiku 8D Imma add another one in a minute though XP
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Post  kaerlighed Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:08 pm

I like the new haiku chu. ^^
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Post  Yami Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:04 pm

ChuChu wrote:Snow of a pure white
Drifting slowly from the sky
Is nature's blanket

Aaw, that's so pretty! I love snow kind of things hakus ^_~ Then again, I like all kind of haikus :0

kaerlighed wrote:I like the new haiku chu. ^^

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