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Post  DarkNymfa on Fri Oct 22, 2010 2:59 pm

Well, they are just so imporant. Why aren't they in the game? I will be working on a sketch. They are for the Earth Kingdom. I will try to get them done by myself, but I think I will need help on the shading part, but I will start with the sketch.

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Post  user560 on Fri Oct 22, 2010 3:02 pm

Good idea ^^
I hope you make good sketches :3
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Post  Lirabet on Fri Oct 22, 2010 3:09 pm

Maybe the pirates can trade them? Smile

Ostrich horses are interesting creatures. I'd like to see them in my zoo.
Good luck with your sketches!
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Post  DarkNymfa on Fri Oct 22, 2010 3:53 pm

I just thought they had to be here. Well, I have my computer with a nice drawing program, and then I'm sitting with a pencil and paper behind it. Weird me, but well, here is the sketch:

I had no idea how the feet were, so I improvised. I like the way it looks. So, how is it?

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Post  user560 on Fri Oct 22, 2010 3:59 pm

It looks nice but the body is a little strange.
I really like the head, you can draw very well ^^
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Post  DarkNymfa on Fri Oct 22, 2010 4:04 pm

user560 wrote:It looks nice but the body is a little strange.
I really like the head, you can draw very well ^^
Thank you, I draw a lot, and practice makes art, hehe. It is possible that the body looks strange because of the wing, which is longer than the body itself. The head just should have the look of it, it just shows the animal.

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Post  Lirabet on Fri Oct 22, 2010 4:27 pm

Upper part is good, but body, legs and feet... er... are not perfect. Smile
I've made this screenshot. It's dark, but maybe it will help a little.



And maybe I'll take another screenshots (I have to find the episodes with those ostrich horses)
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Post  DarkNymfa on Fri Oct 22, 2010 4:32 pm

It's feet are wrong, I already thought that, but the picture you have are fighting/army horses. Normal ones don't have those metal things around the legs. I will adapt the feet tomorrow. I have to go sleep for now.

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Post  Lirabet on Fri Oct 22, 2010 6:44 pm

More screenies:
whole creature


head and body


legs
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Post  DarkNymfa on Wed Oct 27, 2010 8:42 am

Thanks for the pictures. I've adapted the sketch.

I'm sorry for the big bone stuff on the feet, I will adapt it in the spriting session. So, could I start?

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Post  Rebsingh on Wed Oct 27, 2010 4:18 pm

OMG ITS AWESOME!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

I wanna try lining it.... can I? Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!

Derp. Instead of lining, I sprited it... It looks nice and I can upload it when I get home.

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Post  Rebsingh on Wed Oct 27, 2010 10:45 pm

<- made by me, it isnt finisged yet... (the foot smiley), I think its my best sprite work ever. XD Whoever wants to shade the legs and do the foot can do it, but NO touching the rest, :3

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Post  DragonTamerChris on Wed Oct 27, 2010 10:50 pm

Woah that is epic rebsingh. I would love to adopt some of those when they come out.
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Post  ritadragons on Wed Oct 27, 2010 11:09 pm

Lovely sprite Reb! Cannot wait to adopt some of these!
What would there Rarity be? Medium rare? Uncommon? Rare?
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Post  ignite444 on Thu Oct 28, 2010 12:00 am

Make them uncommon, much funner that way.

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Post  PhazonDragon on Thu Oct 28, 2010 1:47 am

The head looks like a mask, or as if it's floating in the air, rather than attached to the neck... :/ Not to mention the eye looks a bit weird. I would think that the eye would be more almond-shaped, and narrower, like a bird's. And you know about the foot already, so I'll ignore that. XD Overall, he looks rather cartoony, actually. :/
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Post  DarkNymfa on Fri Oct 29, 2010 8:19 am

Rebsingh wrote: <- made by me, it isnt finisged yet... (the foot smiley), I think its my best sprite work ever. XD Whoever wants to shade the legs and do the foot can do it, but NO touching the rest, :3
I like it, but the eye and the 'fur' at the head is weird. And for the rarity, I thought something between common and uncommon.

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Post  Lirabet on Fri Oct 29, 2010 11:34 am

DarkNymfa wrote:I like it, but the eye and the 'fur' at the head is weird.
Too many hackles, I think... And the beast looks like S2 hatchling, not the adult creature.
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Post  Rebsingh on Fri Oct 29, 2010 6:10 pm

I eddited some things:

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Post  PhazonDragon on Sat Oct 30, 2010 1:48 am

If you're not done shading yet, then ignore this. If you are, then can I suggest more shadows to the head and neck area? He looks flat there. And his eyes are still weird. Does he have eye brows...? Or eye ridges? :/ I don't think they look right on this sprite.

Also, at this angle, I would think that the far ear would be more behind the closer one, instead of nearly in front, making him look like he has two ears on his forehead.

And I don't know why, but I'm not exactly liking this sprite so far... Something seems off. :/
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Post  KonayukiSpirit on Sat Oct 30, 2010 4:03 am

I've got some color ideas for eggs and hatchlings, if we're planning for them xD

the egg can look like a large ostrich egg (about the size of a badgermole's?) or something. Speckled? xD

S1 can be really dull-colored ,according to baby ostriches, with some color on the ears, tails and head?

S2 can be a little bit more colored, all the floofiness off, so it has a more solid-looking color.

and, well, adults are already figured out, I suppose xD

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Post  DarkNymfa on Sat Oct 30, 2010 6:12 am

His head really looks flat and stuff, and his beak is even worse.

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Post  TitiMiny on Sat Oct 30, 2010 9:46 am

DarkNymfa wrote:His head really looks flat and stuff, and his beak is even worse.

Could you elaborate?

It was already said the head looked flat, but what is ''worse'' about the beak.
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Post  Rebsingh on Sat Oct 30, 2010 10:11 am

If its so horrible, you guys try fixing it. I can't seem to find out whats wrong.

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Post  DarkNymfa on Sat Oct 30, 2010 10:18 am

Rebsingh wrote:If its so horrible, you guys try fixing it. I can't seem to find out whats wrong.
I'm terrible at spriting. All I can is having great idea's, then draw a sketch, and if I try to sprite it, it would be really bad.
And about the beak, it's really flat, and the yellow is greenish, which looks bad at the sprite. I see more than that, but my English isn't good enough to let me translate that.

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