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Re: Komodo Rhino

Post  Lunar on Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:29 pm

Darn, I had a particular lineart I had. I should've came earlier, haha.
Here it is:

I think it is a tad bit large though...

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Post  DragonTamerChris on Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:43 pm

oh no lunar. D:

Hey luna, can you make sketches for the hatchies of the komodo rhino?

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Post  Lunar on Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:47 pm

Just call me Luna please x3 Yes I can. As soon as I finish the sky bison I owe rebs.

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Post  Rebsingh on Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:46 pm

Lunar wrote:Just call me Luna please x3 Yes I can. As soon as I finish the sky bison I owe rebs.
Actually, you can hold that off. Make the sketches quick and stuff and then get the more detailed work in for the sky bison later :3 thanks Smile

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Post  Lunar on Sun Nov 07, 2010 10:48 pm

Here is the hatchling s1/s2 Sketch:

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Post  DragonTamerChris on Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:17 pm

Nice hatchie lunar. Very Happy

I think it could be hatchie (1)

Now we need a hatchie (2) sketch. Very Happy

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Post  Rebsingh on Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:36 pm

DragonTamerChris wrote:Nice hatchie lunar. Very Happy

I think it could be hatchie (1)

Now we need a hatchie (2) sketch. Very Happy
No, we can use the same sketch.

S1, without horns and kind of small, and S2 with horns and just a bit bigger.

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Post  DragonTamerChris on Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:38 pm

I never thought of that rebs, great idea!

That means less work and the sprite would get finished faster. Very Happy

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Post  frozendreams on Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:57 pm

I'm really glad this one has moved along greatly, I love the idea of having some of these in my zoo.

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Post  Rebsingh on Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:54 pm

<- This is almost done, unless it looks fine the way it is.

Its an S1.

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Post  Rebsingh on Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:05 pm

Crits please Sad

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Post  ignite444 on Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:07 pm

I like it, it's cute.

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Post  Rebsingh on Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:11 pm

Thanks Very Happy

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Post  ignite444 on Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:34 pm

Now all we need is a S2.

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Post  frozendreams on Fri Nov 12, 2010 12:40 am

Great work Reb.

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Post  PhazonDragon on Fri Nov 12, 2010 3:51 am

Rebsingh wrote: <- This is almost done, unless it looks fine the way it is.

Its an S1.

The tail and where it connects to the body looks odd. Like, it tapers off from the body as if it were a snake... In the sketch, there seems to be a defined spine to the creature, and I feel like that got lost in the transition from sketch to sprite.
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Re: Komodo Rhino

Post  Rebsingh on Fri Nov 12, 2010 8:40 am

PhazonDragon wrote:
Rebsingh wrote: <- This is almost done, unless it looks fine the way it is.

Its an S1.

The tail and where it connects to the body looks odd. Like, it tapers off from the body as if it were a snake... In the sketch, there seems to be a defined spine to the creature, and I feel like that got lost in the transition from sketch to sprite.
Ok thanks for the Crits, we can really rely on u for those. Razz

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Post  PhazonDragon on Fri Nov 12, 2010 2:25 pm

No prob. XD After taking art with a crazy teacher for two years, it's pretty much natural to crit everything... Plus I want the sprites to look amazing. XD

However... I barely see a difference. I mean, I can spot it, but that's not what I was referring to. I'll gladly do redlines or try to edit if you want, just say so. But what I meant was that the back is too straight... It seems unnatural. There should be a dip in the back, where the ribcage ends, and the pelvis starts. If that makes sense.
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Post  Rebsingh on Fri Nov 12, 2010 5:27 pm

PhazonDragon wrote:No prob. XD After taking art with a crazy teacher for two years, it's pretty much natural to crit everything... Plus I want the sprites to look amazing. XD

However... I barely see a difference. I mean, I can spot it, but that's not what I was referring to. I'll gladly do redlines or try to edit if you want, just say so. But what I meant was that the back is too straight... It seems unnatural. There should be a dip in the back, where the ribcage ends, and the pelvis starts. If that makes sense.
Redline pl0x XD

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Post  PhazonDragon on Fri Nov 12, 2010 5:45 pm



And here's the sprite:


I had to fade the sprite a bit so you could see the red lines, but I hope they help. c:
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Post  Rebsingh on Fri Nov 12, 2010 5:53 pm

Here:

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Post  PhazonDragon on Fri Nov 12, 2010 5:56 pm

So much better. -thumbs up- I approve. Now it looks like it has anatomy, rather than just a blob for a body.
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Post  DragonTamerChris on Fri Nov 12, 2010 5:58 pm

Woah, that actully does look a lot better. =3

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Post  Rebsingh on Fri Nov 12, 2010 6:02 pm

PhazonDragon wrote:So much better. -thumbs up- I approve. Now it looks like it has anatomy, rather than just a blob for a body.
You're right. Thanks for the help Smile

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Post  PhazonDragon on Fri Nov 12, 2010 6:03 pm

No problem. C: Glad to help.
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