Cat Owls
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Lirabet
Rebsingh
frozendreams
grayson1314
DragonTamerChris
miggyrox789
TitiMiny
Satyr76
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Re: Cat Owls
I think something furless/featherless would be good for S1. Or maybe down? Like a baby bird?
And I can red line the original sprite if you want, if that will help. I didn't do it before because I didn't know if you would like that. I know I don't want people touching my work without my permission.
On the S1 sprite though, the tail looks very weird, and unnaturally stiff in that position. It might look better to have it curl around the paws or something. And I have no clue what those are supposed to be... Well, I know they're limbs, but they look... weird. :/ I dunno how else to describe it.
And I can red line the original sprite if you want, if that will help. I didn't do it before because I didn't know if you would like that. I know I don't want people touching my work without my permission.
On the S1 sprite though, the tail looks very weird, and unnaturally stiff in that position. It might look better to have it curl around the paws or something. And I have no clue what those are supposed to be... Well, I know they're limbs, but they look... weird. :/ I dunno how else to describe it.
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Re: Cat Owls
PhazonDragon wrote:I think something furless/featherless would be good for S1. Or maybe down? Like a baby bird?
And I can red line the original sprite if you want, if that will help. I didn't do it before because I didn't know if you would like that. I know I don't want people touching my work without my permission.
On the S1 sprite though, the tail looks very weird, and unnaturally stiff in that position. It might look better to have it curl around the paws or something. And I have no clue what those are supposed to be... Well, I know they're limbs, but they look... weird. :/ I dunno how else to describe it.
They're folded wings, not paws. Go ahead and redline if you want.. and i admit the tail is annoying :/
Better?
TitiMiny- Posts : 92
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Re: Cat Owls
Nice .
I think I already made an egg descrption but:
Egg:
"This egg is light brown and oval shaped."
Hatchie (1)
"Hey look, a cute cat creature hatched from that egg you found. It also resembles an owl."
I think I already made an egg descrption but:
Egg:
"This egg is light brown and oval shaped."
Hatchie (1)
"Hey look, a cute cat creature hatched from that egg you found. It also resembles an owl."
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Re: Cat Owls
I tried fixing it up a bit, I hope you don't mind. :3TitiMiny wrote:
Tried to fix on my own..
Re: Cat Owls
I like the edits rebs, I just wished the left wing was spread out more.
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Re: Cat Owls
Rebsingh wrote:I tried fixing it up a bit, I hope you don't mind. :3TitiMiny wrote:
Tried to fix on my own..
i like, but there's a random black line in the wing that looks off and that wasn't there on my sprite O;..it won't look off if you color the areas that peachy color the body is.
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Re: Cat Owls
Can you fix up the rest? I just put in and did things that bothered me, I think you can take it from here Its almost done!
Re: Cat Owls
Yes, titi, I love the work you did with this sprite and I hope you become a spriter here at avadopts.
The cat owl hatchie 1 is cool.
The cat owl hatchie 1 is cool.
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Re: Cat Owls
I said limbs, not paws. I figured they were wings, but I honestly couldn't tell because of how odd they looked.TitiMiny wrote:PhazonDragon wrote:I think something furless/featherless would be good for S1. Or maybe down? Like a baby bird?
And I can red line the original sprite if you want, if that will help. I didn't do it before because I didn't know if you would like that. I know I don't want people touching my work without my permission.
On the S1 sprite though, the tail looks very weird, and unnaturally stiff in that position. It might look better to have it curl around the paws or something. And I have no clue what those are supposed to be... Well, I know they're limbs, but they look... weird. :/ I dunno how else to describe it.
They're folded wings, not paws. Go ahead and redline if you want.. and i admit the tail is annoying :/
Better? :)
And yes, that does look better (along with the adult edits. I like those, and I don't think my redline is needed anymore). Though it looks like the wing is just.. floating there. It doesn't look connected to the body.
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Re: Cat Owls
Kk i'll fix all that :>
(Not sure how to fix, but did this help?)
(Not sure how to fix, but did this help?)
TitiMiny- Posts : 92
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Re: Cat Owls
The only thing that needs fixing on the adult is the left wing, it dosen't even look like it has one right now. :/
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Re: Cat Owls
DragonTamerChris wrote:The only thing that needs fixing on the adult is the left wing, it dosen't even look like it has one right now. :/
it's folded...looks fine to me. i can bump it up a bit more, but im not making it in the same pose as the right.
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Re: Cat Owls
Now that I look at it, it looks fine to me. XD
Strange... how is hatchie (2) going?
Strange... how is hatchie (2) going?
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Re: Cat Owls
Interesting, I can't wait to see the sprited version of that hatchie.
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Re: Cat Owls
Lovely. I think they both look brilliant now. <3 Good job.TitiMiny wrote:Kk i'll fix all that :>
(Not sure how to fix, but did this help?)
And I can't wait to see that hatchling fixed up... Such a cute pose. XD
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Re: Cat Owls
PhazonDragon wrote:Lovely. I think they both look brilliant now. <3 Good job.TitiMiny wrote:Kk i'll fix all that :>
(Not sure how to fix, but did this help?)
And I can't wait to see that hatchling fixed up... Such a cute pose. XD
: ) Thanks you for helping though. I'll get on shading+ fixing that S2 right after i ate.
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Re: Cat Owls
Cool titi.
I love these cat owls and can't wait for these to be released on the adoptable site avadopts.
You are doing an excellent job with these sprites.
I love these cat owls and can't wait for these to be released on the adoptable site avadopts.
You are doing an excellent job with these sprites.
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Re: Cat Owls
Nice
Here are all the descriptions gathered in one post and the hatchie (2) and adult ones.
Egg:
"This egg is light brown and oval shaped."
Hatchie (1):
"Hey look, a cute cat creature hatched from that egg you found. It also resembles an owl."
Hatchie (2):
"The cute creature you found grew bigger and doesn't like to sleep much anymore. It also grew wings, this might mean it's growing up soon."
Adult:
"Cat owls are a happy breed of creatures. They fly around a lot and unlike owls they can be seen at night and day. Cat owls like to go near humans but they are always cautious when they are around them. When the cat owls breed they fly around in the sky and whichever cat owl is the fastest, most playful, and most active gets a mate and they breed. Cat owls are found in the air temples but they are also sold in quite a few shops around the earth kingdom".
Anyone think these descriptions need edits?
Here are all the descriptions gathered in one post and the hatchie (2) and adult ones.
Egg:
"This egg is light brown and oval shaped."
Hatchie (1):
"Hey look, a cute cat creature hatched from that egg you found. It also resembles an owl."
Hatchie (2):
"The cute creature you found grew bigger and doesn't like to sleep much anymore. It also grew wings, this might mean it's growing up soon."
Adult:
"Cat owls are a happy breed of creatures. They fly around a lot and unlike owls they can be seen at night and day. Cat owls like to go near humans but they are always cautious when they are around them. When the cat owls breed they fly around in the sky and whichever cat owl is the fastest, most playful, and most active gets a mate and they breed. Cat owls are found in the air temples but they are also sold in quite a few shops around the earth kingdom".
Anyone think these descriptions need edits?
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Re: Cat Owls
expect 2 or 3 edits when they are added
I'll add these next weekend, along with koala sheep, and maybe the cabbage slug. I just need pictures to go along with the searching part of the quest...
I'll add these next weekend, along with koala sheep, and maybe the cabbage slug. I just need pictures to go along with the searching part of the quest...
Re: Cat Owls
Cool. I wasn't totally done as i am lacking the alts.
I though maybe they could have some markings elsewhere + different color. Though im not sure if it should be a redder color or more grey-like.
For now they'll have the same sprite pretty much like both genders will have, until i can make a few good sketches for the other gender/alts. ( Except the alt is slightly differently colored egg/current sprite).
I though maybe they could have some markings elsewhere + different color. Though im not sure if it should be a redder color or more grey-like.
For now they'll have the same sprite pretty much like both genders will have, until i can make a few good sketches for the other gender/alts. ( Except the alt is slightly differently colored egg/current sprite).
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